Friday, October 19, 2012

Logline Revision from MSFV via KT Crowley

 
 
Check out my logline revision from Miss Snark's First Victim's Logline Critique...kindly hosted by K.T. Crowley on her blog. Click here to read and comment.
 
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I've learned so much from this great community of writers. Thank you!

4 comments :

  1. Ah, the dreaded logline. Good luck on the auction. I can't enter because most of the agents participated I've queried and they rejected it. Though for most, it was for an old version of the ms and query.

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    1. It is a bit dreaded, huh. I suppose for some it just comes or they have a knack for it or they have countless loglines until they refine it and kapow! Not so for me...

      Thanks for stopping by!

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  2. Oh man, these are tricky. Yours sounds good though! Other than the repeated word of 'free' (free and freedom) that was really the only thing that I thought I might change.

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    1. Isn't it really all in the details?! I changed it :) Thanks for the feedback...I so appreciate not living in the isolated little world of my home office, except of course when I'm writing.

      Cheers!

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